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Ms. Mou
Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 11:51 pm Reply with quote
Drag Queen Extraordinaire Joined: 21 Oct 2005 Posts: 1275 Location: Savannah, GA
Tackle and score
You're so amazing.
Winning every race without breaking a sweat,
must be the root of all...

Leave your uniform at the door.
Draw the blinds,
Don't look behind,
Flip the switch as you leave
your uniform at the door.

Mind numbing rants to draw me near
Merely spun to keep you here.
We're both selfish and we're both out of our damn minds.
Using that word for these felings to keep us intertwined.

Leave your uniform at the door.
Draw the blinds,
Don't look behind,
Flip the switch as you leave
your uniform at the door.

Another high five,
Another jab at the worst dressed at lunch.
Let's talk over the people more petty than us
So they never know we're more petty than them.
Our promises total to triple digits in a year
And at the end of four let's seal them in the wall between us.
I'll remind you and you'll remind me
With our most insincere smiles we're friends not enemies.
I'll smile and ask about you and the kids.
You'll smile and call me by my most hated name.
And this is how we will shame
Those four years we rose to fame.

Leave your uniform at the door.
Draw the blinds,
Don't look behind,
Flip the switch as you leave
your uniform at the door.
And when you return dusty and sad,
And are so sure I'm all too glad
to welcome and wash
and soothe you to squash
All the fresh dirt in trenches we ripped
I'll comply.
We'll use that word for these feelings
Just to get by
After all, we're out of our damn minds.
And just like this and every other time
Leave your uniform at the door.
Draw the blinds,
Don't look behind,
Flip the switch as you leave
your uniform at the door.
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Justin
Posted: Fri Aug 04, 2006 7:22 am Reply with quote
Supreme Death Eater Joined: 04 Nov 2004 Posts: 3535 Location: Ohio
You should sing these. I mean, due to repetition, I'm assuming they're songs. But because they don't really follow a pattern, and don't make total collective sense, you should sing them so maybe we'll get a sense of what they sound like.
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Tricky
Posted: Wed Aug 09, 2006 2:42 pm Reply with quote
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Joined: 10 May 2006 Posts: 163 Location: Statesboro
i love them. but unless you're used to ivy singing, they're probably better read.
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Justin
Posted: Wed Aug 09, 2006 2:48 pm Reply with quote
Supreme Death Eater Joined: 04 Nov 2004 Posts: 3535 Location: Ohio
Tricky wrote:
i love them. but unless you're used to ivy singing, they're probably better read.


Veiled insult, it seems.
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Tricky
Posted: Wed Aug 09, 2006 2:51 pm Reply with quote
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Joined: 10 May 2006 Posts: 163 Location: Statesboro
no insult. listen to her sing. she sings exceptionally breathy and often softly. It's not bad, but it sounds like a melodic whisper. A few she sounds louder on. For the most part she sings breathy and soft.
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Ms. Mou
Posted: Wed Aug 09, 2006 7:19 pm Reply with quote
Drag Queen Extraordinaire Joined: 21 Oct 2005 Posts: 1275 Location: Savannah, GA
lol@melodic whisper. come here little boy i'll tell you what i got! wait till you see me OH. wait till you see me OH
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Ms. Mou
Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 2:33 pm Reply with quote
Drag Queen Extraordinaire Joined: 21 Oct 2005 Posts: 1275 Location: Savannah, GA
jermiah should post on here. i forgot he came on.

BUT, i really like this. i forgot i'd ever wrote it and i think i remember the boy it was originally about although now it can kinda apply to someone else as well. just a little.
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